I agree with @Tom.A.Smith. Came here for the same reason and was rather taken aback by your interpretation of Brent. He's basically just an annoying guy I think and this poem goes to show what a skewed self-perception he has! I liked your interpretation of the poem though, you took the sense that David probably thought he was conveying, though I'd guess he'd say it wasn't 'dope' enough because he thinks that would make him seem cooler?

Staying on your actual thought process though, I wonder if anyone has ever written a truly touching "Roses are red, violets are blue…" poem?